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Gomeifuku wo inorimasu: Invereted by Kashim-taichou Gomeifuku wo inorimasu: Invereted by Kashim-taichou
This is the creepier version of my picture. I inverted it. XD It looks pretty cool this way too I think.

:thumb348922839: The original version.

A small story to go along with it that I was thinking of while drawing this. I'll never finish it, just want to put the small bit on here though.

It was a cold and blistery October night. A very young girl was all alone in a cemetery, visiting a grave that wasn’t old, but it wasn’t new either. She often visited it, even though she only knew her elder brother from stories her parents told her. He had died before she was born.

Even so she always brought flowers to his grave. She kneeled in front of the familiar tombstone and placed the flowers there, before glancing around and brushing back her hood. This cemetery wasn’t too far from her home, so she was able to sneak out during the night and do this.

She stayed there and looked up at the night sky, it was slightly cloudy and occasionally the clouds would cover the moon and make it dark, but they always passed. It was cold, cold enough to see her own breath with every exhale into the cold night.
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Vision: I know for who it is, and it is very him. I even see him standing as spirit next to his stone, under the tree, watching over Yuki.

Originality: It's better then the original, the black gives a creepy atmosphere and how the rose is blinking out near the stone...love it!

Technique: I know you, you tried your best on it and I need to say, the perspective view is quite good. For the path of stones...maybe a nice advice, if you gonna draw something again. Search for some reference, it is not a shame to do it...I do it as well if I don't know it anymore...

Impact: Original: Okay, well done. This one: Wow...spooky yet a good impression of a graveyard...As a normal person, you shouldn't walk there...but for meeting that certain person...well, let's go!

I like this one alot....Keep up with the perspective view...you got in it to you ^^
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kurippe 21 hours ago  New member
can i post this graveyard image of yours on my FB? thanks
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Kashim-taichou 18 hours ago  Hobbyist General Artist
I'd rather people not put my work on their FB.
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