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Burns With A FireMy soul burns with a fire.

It burns hotter than any one thing.
Something so bright,
It draws attention.

Not everyone can handle the heat.
If you get to close without knowing what you’re doing,
You may get a little burned.

Know it’s not on purpose.
Sometimes the fire burns out of control inside.
Sometimes it burns everything around it.

It burns with many things,
It burns with love,
It burns with anger,
It burns with passion,
But most importantly…

It burns with the spirit given to me by God.
ProtectI stand and watch you from afar and am immersed by your personality.

You, whom I so deeply desire to take into my arms,
To hold and hug without having a reason to do so.
A younger sister I have never had the pleasure of having.

I strongly desire to protect you.
I desire to keep you safe from the sorrows of this world,
To protect you from the world outside.

I want you to know what the world has in store for you.
I want to hold you and protect you.
I truly wish to see you grow strong and fly free, unburdened.

When you are sad,
I am as well.
When you cry,
I want to as well.
I want to be able to say the right words to lead you through the da
You and IYou and I, we walk a path through the ever burning flame of life.

Our minds are entwined.
And if it were at all possible for the closet of companions, our hearts beat as one.
My respect and admiration for your loyalty to me is unending.

Our friendship is that of legends,
What one might only find in fairy tales.
But it is stronger than the strongest steel.

Even though I walk a hard path of burning brimstone,
You are still here beside me willing to stay.
You are willing to stand beside the unbridled, burning passion of my heart.

We stand on equal terms,
Side by side,
Bound for eternity as a friendship amongst the greatest that ever existed
In this darknessIn this darkness you are a light.

In the darkness you helped me.
A past I believed I could never move on from,
You lit up the path to aid me in escaping from that burden.

We both carry a heavy weight, but
Our paths were destined by God to cross,
So that we would not have to shoulder the encumbrance alone.

Your trodden opinion of yourself,
It saddens me.
I want to see you smile,
Because you have made me smile with your amiable ways.

It is not my wish for you to carry the weight alone,
because I have bared it on my own before.
And also, because I love you, even if sometimes the path is harsh.
So please, let me be your friend… and wal

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:iconkashim-taichou:
This is the creepier version of my picture. I inverted it. XD It looks pretty cool this way too I think.

The original version.
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Critique by *Natsume-Senpai Jan 18, 2013, 12:46:01 PM
Vision: I know for who it is, and it is very him. I even see him standing as spirit next to his stone, under the tree, watching over Yuki.

Originality: It's better then the original, the black gives a creepy atmosphere and how the rose is blinking out near the stone...love it!

Technique: I know you, you tried your best on it and I need to say, the perspective view is quite good. For the path of stones...maybe a nice advice, if you gonna draw something again. Search for some reference, it is not a shame to do it...I do it as well if I don't know it anymore...

Impact: Original: Okay, well done. This one: Wow...spooky yet a good impression of a graveyard...As a normal person, you shouldn't walk there...but for meeting that certain person...well, let's go!

I like this one alot....Keep up with the perspective view...you got in it to you ^^
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